domenica 29 agosto 2010
Issue 11, Page 24
Author Comment:
And that's it for Issue 11! I hope you guys liked it.
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Snow Job Ch 04 Pg 03
And now we start getting some explanations!
Whenever I can, I try to avoid characters delivering long bits of explanatory exposition since it rarely feels natural. But in this case, I think it works since Goshen would believably be explaining to his captors what he knows about their operation in order to show that he is no fool and is well aware of what they do and why they do it.
I like that while Goshen believes he’s telling Roka’s group things they already know, the actuality is that they don’t already know. So Roka and Ril are learning the true details of the operation at the same time as the readers. I hope it’s clear in the artwork that Ril’s comment is not meant to be snarky towards Goshen. He’s actually legitimately impressed by the creativity of the drug smuggling operation and is commenting to Roka. It’s Goshen who mistakes that for self-congratulatory posturing on Ril’s part.
"#221 – “Cleef and Effect”
Bang.
In retrospect, I guess everyone suspected Chekov of being the main Defias supplier of firearms anyway.
Edit: Re-rendered one of the panes as the visual didn’t quite focus test as effective enough. It should be somewhat more obvious now.
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SF Origins: Operation: Valhalla, #6 "Spy Gal Arrives"
OPERATION: VALHALLA ENDS HERE!
And now you see how it all began. This strip was tricky. It's the only one that I can remember that has both Jerry and Dr. Klein in it at the same time. The artist, Mike Hartigan, had no clue about the link between them and, for some reason, removed the panel of Spy Gal sitting alone in her room with the clock ticking by that I had scripted. My feeling was that it was important to show time passing so that, years later when it was finally revealed that Jerry and Dr. Klein are the same person, you all wouldn't come barking at me about how there's no way Dr. Klein could have changed into Jerry that fast (even though how much time passes between panels in a comic book is always up for debate--but ANYWAY). This has been the challenge of the SuperFogeys for four years now--writing it such that it would enjoyable and intelligible to all of you taking the journey in the present, while at the same time making sure that your future selves would be satisfied! (Is it any wonder I introduced time travel as a story element?)
I could have asked the artist to do a redraw, but the only way to make it not sound like nitpicking was to tell him the secret and I was not going to do that. The SuperFogeys weren't even a year old back then! It was way too early to start trusting people with something that big. Instead, I opted for the very, very tired device you see in the last panel, the "Later..." caption. It makes me cringe, but at least it gets the job done, right?
And you know more than you need to know about that.
Don't forget that Operation: Valhalla and many other unseen stories can be purchased as a part of SuperFogeys Vol. 1, along with Chapters 1-5.
NEW SUPERFOGEYS ORIGINS ON TUESDAY!
Be sure and come back on Tuesday as we resume our regular schedule and the first page of Spy Gal's origin drops, with art by the phenomenally talented Lee Cherolis, winner of the Spy Gal Art Contest!
Also, for those of you that haven't heard the Tall Tale Radio interview I did recently, I'll be announcing the latest artist to sign up for an Origin story and the story we'll be working on together--with preview art!
BUBBLES OF LIGHT STARTS ON THURSDAY!
And then, on Thursday, Chapter 10, Bubbles of Light begins! You don't want to miss this one. Many of your questions will be answered, that I can guarantee!
"sabato 28 agosto 2010
SF Origins: Operation: Valhalla, #5 "A Spot of Drool"
WELCOME TO A SPECIAL SATURDAY UPDATE!
This is the penultimate strip of Operation: Valhalla - The DIRECT SuperFogeys Prequel. Hope you all have been digging it so far.
This is the first appearance of Spy Gal's family, but most of you will remember them from Chapter 7, Visiting Day.
Last strip of this story is tomorrow, see you then!